I really like the fact the picture is set in an arcade, the darkness of it and the font used because i feel it goes with your genre. I can tell you have looked at case studies in detail as your advert looks professional and includes all the elements it should.
The image isn't very clear but I like the angle you've taken the photo of the guy; hiding his face which is quite effective. I like how its set in an arcade but if the shot was long shot it would have been a little more clear that its set in a arcade. Maybe the date at the top is too big? the poster is very simple but professional looking due to a consistent colour scheme. The white complements the black background.
Advantages: -I like the way you included the logos of your distributor (sound cloud) and publisher (rocket) in your magazine advert, so the people reading this advert in a magazine knows what record label made it. -khalid -I also like the way you placed your text above and below your main image in a way so that the whole poster doesn't look cluttered with text. -I also like the way you kept the colour scheme of this poster consistent with your other print products and also your music video, (white/grey text and purple/red) the purple/red colour came from the surroundings of the arcade. -I also like the way you added the website of your artist so that if your target audience wants to get more information such as featured artists and other albums/singles they can easily just visit this site and find out more. -I like the camera shot you've take in this poster (mid shot) and the way your artist isn't looking directly at the camera (it suites the style of your artist). -and I also like the way an arcade game is right behind him (adds more visual interest to your poster).
Disadvantages: -The colours of the text aren't the same throughout your poster (for example the website link is in grey, while the other text is completely white). -The font of the text itself isn't consistent as well (the date on the top is in a different font compared to the rest of your text). -The images you used isn't very clear (I can't see the artists face at all because it's a bit blurred, but the overall images looks much better). -you could have trimmed the image a bit so that the blue walls in the background are minimised a bit (so we can focus on your artist more).
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ReplyDeleteI really like the fact the picture is set in an arcade, the darkness of it and the font used because i feel it goes with your genre. I can tell you have looked at case studies in detail as your advert looks professional and includes all the elements it should.
ReplyDeleteThe image isn't very clear but I like the angle you've taken the photo of the guy; hiding his face which is quite effective. I like how its set in an arcade but if the shot was long shot it would have been a little more clear that its set in a arcade. Maybe the date at the top is too big? the poster is very simple but professional looking due to a consistent colour scheme. The white complements the black background.
ReplyDeleteAdvantages:
ReplyDelete-I like the way you included the logos of your distributor (sound cloud) and publisher (rocket) in your magazine advert, so the people reading this advert in a magazine knows what record label made it.
-khalid
-I also like the way you placed your text above and below your main image in a way so that the whole poster doesn't look cluttered with text.
-I also like the way you kept the colour scheme of this poster consistent with your other print products and also your music video, (white/grey text and purple/red) the purple/red colour came from the surroundings of the arcade.
-I also like the way you added the website of your artist so that if your target audience wants to get more information such as featured artists and other albums/singles they can easily just visit this site and find out more.
-I like the camera shot you've take in this poster (mid shot) and the way your artist isn't looking directly at the camera (it suites the style of your artist).
-and I also like the way an arcade game is right behind him (adds more visual interest to your poster).
Disadvantages:
-The colours of the text aren't the same throughout your poster (for example the website link is in grey, while the other text is completely white).
-The font of the text itself isn't consistent as well (the date on the top is in a different font compared to the rest of your text).
-The images you used isn't very clear (I can't see the artists face at all because it's a bit blurred, but the overall images looks much better).
-you could have trimmed the image a bit so that the blue walls in the background are minimised a bit (so we can focus on your artist more).