A very detailed account of where you are at so far, and it is useful to bring together the various strands of the research and planning work you've done, and evaluate it. You draw on a range of examples which is helpful. You'll probably need to update this on the basis of your last-minute change of actors. You make plenty of reference to last year's project but I think you could further emphasise the areas in which you've improved. You add some visuals and embedded material. Well done
A very detailed account of where you are at so far, and it is useful to bring together the various strands of the research and planning work you've done, and evaluate it. You draw on a range of examples which is helpful. You'll probably need to update this on the basis of your last-minute change of actors. You make plenty of reference to last year's project but I think you could further emphasise the areas in which you've improved. You add some visuals and embedded material. Well done
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